Monday, July 25, 2022

Week 4 - Summer School at SOTA

 MONDAY    7-25-22      EBC PRACTICE   PART I    

        ANNOUNCEMENTS          Share

1.  Did you check your Gmail this morning?

2.  PROGRESS REPORTS:  Please have your progress report signed by a parent or guardian and return it tomorrow for a homework grade worth 30 points.


        DO NOW                     

Play Kahoot on Evidence-Based Claims.


LEARNING TARGETS    

I can practice writing an Evidence-based Claim essay on an article about internet-connected toys and children's privacy.


        MINI-LESSON          


Internet Connected Barbie Doll Commerical.


Review of how to write an evidence-based claim.



        WORK TIME          

1.  Complete an Active Reading Worksheet for Assignment 24.0 based on the article, "High Tech Barbie..." 

2.  Complete an EBC Worksheet for the article above.



          ASSESSMENT          

Turn in assignments 24.0 and 25.0 by the end of the period.





     TUESDAY    7-26-22      EBC Practice Part II     


        ANNOUNCEMENTS          

1.  Did you check your Gmail this morning?

2.  Did you turn in your progress report signed by a parent or guardian?



        DO NOW          

Play preview Kahoot on The Five Paragraph Essay


LEARNING TARGETS    

I can practice writing an Evidence-based Claim based on an article about a doctor who is creating new hearts and personalized medications using stem cells.


        MINI-LESSON          

1.  What are stem cells and how do they work?

2.  What is personalized or genomic medicine?


Need a review of how to write an EBC? Check out the link below...

Review of how to write an evidence-based claim.


        WORK TIME          

1.  Complete an Active Reading Worksheet for Assignment 26.0 for the article, "This Man Might Make You a New Heart" 

2.  Complete an EBC Worksheet, Assignment 27.0 for the article above.


          ASSESSMENT          

Turn in both Assignments 26.0 and 27.0 by the end of the period for a classwork grade worth 60 points.





     WEDNESDAY & THURSDAY     7-28, 29-22      MAKE-Up Days      


        ANNOUNCEMENTS          

1.  Check your Gmail twice a day - before school and after school.

2.  Did you turn in your signed progress report?

3.  Don't forget to bring in a novel of your choice tomorrow for independent reading time!


        DO NOW          

1.  Go into Google Classroom and check the grades you received on Assignments 20.0, 21.0, 22.0, and The Six-word Horror Story (please check the share settings if you received a 0).

2.  Be sure to read the comments on your papers.

3.  Take the Summer School Survey for English I in Google Classroom.

4.  Follow the instructions below to sign up for BrainPop with your Class Code


PERIOD 2





LEARNING TARGETS    

I can analyze my grades for English I to determine what assignments I need to complete to improve my grade using Google Classroom.


        WORK TIME          

1.  Complete any missing assignments for partial credit and submit them before the end of the period.

2.  If you have completed all your work you may do the extra credit assignment in Google Classroom or do other classwork of your choice.



          ASSESSMENT          

Submit all completed make-up work by the end of the period for partial credit.



     FRIDAY     7-29-22      Independent Reading and Finish Make-up Work         


ANNOUNCEMENTS

1.  You should now be done with all assignments up to and including Assignment 27.0.

2.  Check your grade.  This grade sheet is missing assignments 25.0-28.0.  So your grade may be lower or higher depending on if you did them or not.


WORK TIME

1.  Complete any work you haven't done first, today!

2.  When all your work is complete, work on Independent Reading Assignment 29.0.

3.  Please see me for help if you are struggling to complete your work.



 

Sunday, July 17, 2022

Week 3 - Summer School at SOTA - 2022

      MONDAY       7-18-22                     

        ANNOUNCEMENTS          

1.  Check your Gmail twice a day - before school and after school.

2.  The end of this week will be halfway through summer school.  If you are not passing by the end of the week it will be VERY challenging to catch up and pass the course.


        DO NOW          

1. Open this Padlet. Password: disney

2. Answer this question: What are some things you have learned so far in summer school that you think will help you in the future?

3. Use TR EA T.

4. Be sure you put your name on it.

5. You will have 15 minutes to complete this activity.

6. This is a classwork grade worth 20 Points!


LEARNING TARGETS    

I can practice SOAPSTone and writing a TREAT essay based on a poem.



        WORK TIME          


1.  Complete Assignment 19.0 in Google Classroom for classwork grades worth 20 and 50 Points.


2.  Special Offer:  Complete any missing assignments for partial credit. Due at the end of the period.



          ASSESSMENT          

Turn in Assignment 19.0 by the end of the period.


  

     WEDNESDAY    7-20-22           


        ANNOUNCEMENTS          

1. Check your Gmail now!

2.  Check your current grade.



        DO NOW          

Go to Google Classroom and find your current grade on the grade report posted there.


LEARNING TARGETS    

1.  I can analyze my progress in English I so far this summer and identify the work I need to make up.

2.  I can improve my average by completing assignments I have missed.



        MINI-LESSON          

How to analyze your grade and prioritize.


        WORK TIME          

Make up any missing assignments for partial credit.


What if I have done everything?

1.  Complete the Extra Credit Assignment in Google Classroom called Six-word Horror Stories. You can only do the extra credit assignment if you have all regular assignments completed.

Or...

2.  Read.  

3.  No videos or gaming.  Music on your headset is OK.





          ASSESSMENT          



   THURSDAY     7-21-22                     


     THURSDAY    7-21-22                              


        ANNOUNCEMENTS          

1. Check your Gmail twice a day - before school and after school.

2.  Did you finish yesterday's assignment?

3.  Don't forget to bring a book for independent reading time tomorrow!

4.  Check out your updated grades in Google Classroom.




        DO NOW          


Start a New Page in your Notebook titled - The Parts of an Evidence-Based Claim (EBC)

What is an EBC?
It is a topic sentence that you make up based on evidence from a text.  Sort of a logical conclusion you make up based on something you read, listened to, or viewed.



How do you create your own EBC or Topic Sentence?


1.  Think About Your Evidence
Think about the text and come up with two or three pieces of evidence that have a common thread or idea.  In this case, I'm thinking about Laurie's parents not noticing he was a problem child for a couple reasons.

Examples
a.  Laurie's behavior at home was bad (dragged wagon through the house and called father names and used incorrect grammar)
b.  Laurie told his parents all the bad things Charles did but they never investigated further even though they thought Charles might be a bad influence.

2.  How Does the Evidence Connect?

Example:  Thinking about the evidence above, the common thread that links them together is that Laurie showed his bad behavior all along and his parents didn't notice.

3.  State your claim clearly - this is your EBC (Evidence-based Claim)
Example:  In the short story, Charles, by Shirley Jackson, Laurie's parents should have figured out that Laurie was lying about Charles.

Evidence-based Claim Essay

     In the short story, Charles by Shirley Jackson, Laurie'sparents should have figured out that Laurie was lying about Charles.  This is because Laurie is a naughty child who says and does bad things.  For example, when Laurie came home the first day of school for lunch, "...he knocked over his little sister’s milk."  Then he used bad grammar.  His mother said, “How was school today? Did you learn anything?’’  Laurie said, “I didn’t learn nothing." He even called his father, "...an ol'dust mop." But the most telling sign that he was lying about Charles is when he came home late from school.  When his parents asked why he had to stay after school he said, “Charles yelled so much that the teacher came in from first grade. She said our teacher had to keep Charles quiet. And so Charles had to stay after school. And so all the children stayed to watch him.”  This doesn't make any sense.  Why would a teacher make the whole class stay after and watch one child who was bad?  If Laurie's parents had paid more attention, they would have figured out that Laurie was lying.  These examples prove that Laurie is a naughty child and could easily make up a lie like Charles so he wouldn't get in trouble.  Laurie's parents should have figured out he was lying way before they found out from Laurie's teacher at the PTA meeting.


LEARNING TARGETS    

  • I can explain what an Evidence-Based Claim (EBC) is.

  • I can create an Evidence-Based Claim.

        MINI-LESSON          



        WORK TIME          


Open Assignment 20.0.  We will create an EBC together as a class example.



          ASSESSMENT          

1.  Complete Active Reading Assignment 21.0 and submit.  Due end of the period.

2.  Then, complete Assignment 22.0 and submit.  Due date to be determined.




     FRIDAY     7-22-22      Independent Reading Time     

        ANNOUNCEMENTS          

1. Check your Gmail twice a day - before school and after school.

2.  Did you finish yesterday's assignment?  If not do that today first!

3.  Did you bring a book to read?

4.  Check out your updated grades in the student grade system.


        DO NOW          

1.  Open assignment 23.0 in Google Classroom.

2.  Get out your independent reading book.

LEARNING TARGETS              


I can practice Active Reading for pleasure using a book of my choice.

      MINI-LESSON          

Review of active reading.  


        WORK TIME          


1.  Finish Assignments 21.0 and 22.0 from yesterday if not complete.

2.  Actively read your independent reading text.



          ASSESSMENT                 

Turn in assignment 23.0 for a classwork grade worth up to 30 points by the end of the period.





Sunday, July 10, 2022

Week 2 - Summer School - SOTA 2022

     MONDAY        Week 2       7-11-22      What is Active Reading?     

        ANNOUNCEMENTS          Share out one web r

1. Check your grade in Google Classroom now!


2.  Click here to go to the class blog:  johndegrandis4.blogspot.com and start your Do Now.


3.  GRADES:  Remember - you must complete all assignments and they must be in on time or you could fail the course.  Students are given ample time to complete all work IN class.  Other than legal absences, you should get all your work done in class.


ARE YOU IN THE RIGHT PERIOD FOR GOOGLE CLASSROOM?



        DO NOW          


Directions: Go to this Padlet and cut and paste each part of this paragraph in the correct column according to TREAT.

A New Cell Phone Please!

I deserve a new cell phone. This is because I have been doing all my chores at home, my grades are good and my old phone is cracked. I deserve a new phone because I have been doing all my chores like cleaning my room, loading the dishwasher, and taking care of my little sister. This proves I deserve a new phone because I am helping the family. Another example of why I need a phone is that my grades have improved. Since the last marking period, my overall average jumped from 2.0 to 3.5. This proves I deserve a phone because of the effort I am putting in at school. Lastly, I deserve a new phone because my old phone is cracked. This demonstrates I need a new phone because a cracked screen looks unattractive. As you can see, I have several excellent reasons as to why I deserve a new phone and I would like you to consider buying me a new one.


LEARNING TARGETS    


I understand how to use the Active Reading Strategy to make me a better reader forever!


        MINI-LESSON          

Start a new entry in your digital notebook in the Do Now section titled: Active Reading: A Metacognitive Thing!


Power Student Suggestion: Take some notes on this presentation.


What is Active Reading and How Do I Do It?

Read over this presentation to understand how to use active reading to improve your reading comprehension skills.


DEMONSTRATION

Mr. DeGrandis will model how to actively read using the short story, Checkouts using an Active Reading Worksheet.  



        WORK TIME          


Complete assignments 14.0.  Due at the end of the period.




          ASSESSMENT          


1.  Turn in assignment 14.0.

2.  Missing any work?  Turn it in today for partial credit.  Way better than failing or getting a zero!

3.  Bring in a book to read for tomorrow of your choice.  If you don't have one, Mr. DeGrandis will give you a book to read.  Let's hope you like it! 




     TUESDAY    7-12-22                       

        ANNOUNCEMENTS          


1.  Do not give up!  You can still do well and pass!

2.  If you need to, get some work done at home!

3.  If you need help, please let me know!

4.  Suggestions

        A.  Do all the work assigned.

        B.  Participate! Participate! Participate!



        DO NOW          

Go to THIS SITE and practice identifying sentence fragments until Mr. DeGrandis starts class. Be sure to click on GET AN EXPLANATION so you learn why you were correct or incorrect. There are only 20 questions.

LEARNING TARGETS    


I can practice active reading using an article about the San Joaquin Valley and write a TREAT essay about it.



        MINI-LESSON          


1.  Finish yesterday's lesson on Active Reading. Then...


2.  Watch this video about the San Joaquin Valley in Southern California.


        WORK TIME          


1.  Open Assignment 14.5.   

3. Complete and turn in assignment 14.5 by the end of the period.



          ASSESSMENT         

Turn in Assignment 14.5 by end of class today.





     WEDNESDAY          7-13-22                       


        ANNOUNCEMENTS          

GRADES
Mid-marks are coming up next week!  Are you Passing?

1.  Assignments - Are all your assignments completed and on time.

2.  Effort - Assignments are done to the best of your ability and are of the highest quality you can manage.

3.  Participation - You always follow teacher directives.  You ask for help when necessary.  You are proactive (your education is your responsibility).  You are always polite and respectful.  You are on time to class every day.  You have great attendance.

In order to pass this course, you must be demonstrating all three of these aspects during Summer School.

Grades will be updated next week at, the end of the day Friday.



        DO NOW          

WEDNESDAY'S Do Now...
Read the following response from a past student to Assignment 14.5 about the 
San Joaquin Valley.
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DIRECTIONS
Cut and paste the paragraph below into a new entry in your notebook and highlight each part of  TREAT using the following colors...
  1. Topic Sentence... red
  2. Reason Sentence...purple
  3. Evidence (3x)... blue
  4. Analysis (3x)... yellow
  5. Transition Out... green

TR EA EA EA T
Power Tip: Color the topic sentence, reason sentence, and Transition Out sentences first!

Lovin' the Valley
Andrea Friaz-Gallarda illustrates a great love for both her family and the San Joaquin Valley that runs throughout her essay, titled The San Joaquin Valley. This is because she finds beauty in the land and her family. For example, she states, “The sounds of people laughing and talking, food frying, shrieking toddlers, and Street Fighter mingle throughout the house. It’s a makeshift house that is just right for our large family.” (Friaz-Gallardo, 62-63) This proves Andrea loves her family because she is using imagery to describe what it is like to be with her family at her grandma’s house - all the sounds of a big hectic family. Another example is given when she says, “My sister and I always complain about how we’re going to be bored there and how we hate to babysit our little cousins, but that’s just pretending. They’re all so cute.” (Friaz-Gallardo, 60) This quote proves Andre's love for the valley because she talks about how she has to watch her little cousins, and even though she pretends that she doesn’t want to watch them, she really doesn’t mind, because she loves her cousins. Lastly, this example illustrates her deep love of the valley when she says, “Here in the heart of the San Joaquin Valley, the part that no one sees when they pass. A place filled with wonderful people, culture, and most importantly, my family.” (Friaz-Gallardo, 63) This proves she loves it because Andrea expresses her love for both her family and the San Joaquin Valley so deeply. Overall, the unbreakable love that Andrea has for the San Joaquin Valley, and for her family, is evident throughout the text.



LEARNING TARGETS                         


I can peer-review at least two essays today.


        MINI-LESSONS                          


Watch This First: What is the difference between Editing and Reviewing an Essay?


What is Peer Review?


Check out this video from the University of Minnesota's Writing Department.


How do you do it?

1.  How to use Google Docs to share and peer-review an essay.

2.  How to write good feedback when peer-reviewing.

3.  This video gives great advice for peer-reviewing an essay online.

4.  You have a Free Account!  Use Grammarly to check for grammar, spelling, and usage!


How to Screenshot with a Chromebook

How to Attach a File to a Google Classroom Assignment



        WORK TIME                          


1.  Use Grammarly to check for typos, spelling, punctuation, and capitalization errors.

2.  Send your essay to at least two other students for peer-review.

3.  Take a snapshot of their feedback for assignment 15.0 and turn it in.

4.  Make improvements to your essay based on their feedback.

5.  Turn in assignment 14.5 in its most perfect form!


Make-up Offer:  Turn in any missing assignment today for partial credit! 


          ASSESSMENT                       


1.  Turn in Assignment 15.0.

2.  Turn in Assignment 14.5 after you have made changes based on peer review. 





     THURSDAY           7-14-22                      


        ANNOUNCEMENTS          

1.  Check your Gmail twice a day - before school and after school.

2.  Quiz tomorrow on the short story, Charles by Shirley Jackson.




        DO NOW                                    

Kahoot on the parts of TREAT.


LEARNING TARGETS    


1. I can peer review at least two essays and give the author feedback to improve their writing.

2.  I can practice Active Reading using www.ReadWorks.org.

3.  There will be a quiz on the story tomorrow!


        MINI-LESSON          


Class Notes on Your Essays

1.  Citations

2.  Delete TREAT from essay.

3.  Use dark-colored text when color coding.  Light colors are difficult to read.

4.  Use direct quotes from the text as evidence.


        WORK TIME          


1.  You will have 30 minutes to complete yesterday's peer review process and turn in assignment 15.0 as well as assignment 14.5.

2.  Then you must complete assignment 16.0 in Google classroom which is due at the end of the period.



          ASSESSMENT          

Assignments 14.5, 15.0, and 16.0 are due by the end of the period.





     FRIDAY         7-15-22                            


        ANNOUNCEMENTS          

1. Check your Gmail twice a day - before school and after school.

2.  Fire Drill: This will happen at the end of the third period.

3.  Quiz on Charles by Shirley Jackson!   You will only have 15 minutes for this quiz.  It is a Quiz/Test Grade worth 18 Points.



        DO NOW                                  

Take the quiz in Google Classroom, Assignment 17.0.  (15 minutes only - 18 Points).

LEARNING TARGETS                     

I can use the SOAPSTone method to analyze poetry.


      MINI-LESSON                  


1.  Being able to analyze poetry is a skill that will help you become a more critical thinker.  It may also be on your final assessment for this course as well as the regent's exam for English III.

2.  You can use the SOAPSTone method to better understand virtually any poem as well as fiction and non-fiction of all kinds.

3.  Check out this presentation on SOAPSTone to learn how to do it!

4.  SOAPSTone Worksheet (You may need to make a copy.)

5.  Kahoot Review of SOAPSTone!


        WORK TIME          


Complete Assignment 18.0 in Google Classroom.



          ASSESSMENT                    


Turn in Assignment 18.0 in Google Classroom.